RAYZOON

Super depresso.

https://soundcloud.com/jasonbrianmerril ... dream-demo

Any feedback or help welcome

Hi Jason,

That song is so depresso that my Surface locked up hard after listening to it. No idea what happened there. Check the Bass note @ 5:35, sounds out of key to me. Not a criticism but I kept singing Hotel California in my head due to the chord progression. Nice work man.

yeah that bridge is weird... hehe

I liked the song. I think the things out of key are intentional and part of the stethic, like the synth in 2:49, for example. Nice drumming.

I think the vocals are a good example of what's meaning to be out of key. I was going to do another take, and eventually I will, but I already like how they turned out.

I'll check out that synth, it could just be me putting a note in there that's "out" or it could be a mistake

Knopf_ wrote:I liked the song. I think the things out of key are intentional and part of the stethic, like the synth in 2:49, for example. Nice drumming.

that's guitar and yes it's intentional hahaha but I didn't consider it out, just a far too gradual slide

Hey that song isn’t bad man.

I enjoyed listening. Yes it was, moody. But not sure about depresso!! Not for me anyway. I might have to listen more closely to the words. At work right now and was just listening to it. Good work on the drums. I liked the atmosphere you created. Just enough space to breath.

this is not the first track of yours that i listen to, and not the first track i notice a heavy (early) Muse influence in are you a fan by any chance?

although to be fair, this is more of a Jeff Buckley vibe than straight up Muse, but same difference! this gave me goosebumps...

hey, thank you! There are a couple of things I want to change on it, but I do consider this pretty much done.

And those are two bands/acts I truly enjoy so thanks again for THAT